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Numb-In Not So Many Words by ~undecided-impulsive:iconundecided-impulsive:



calm
numbings
trickle from my mind
flooding me with a false security...
and tears...
          its okay.... its okay....

nothing
and nothing
utter vast
of space
and time
in shelter

numb-
in not so many words

          its okay.... its okay....

for if i breathe
am i not alive?
for if i run
am i not mobile?
for if i sing
am i not free?

for if my shallow heart still beats
do i not exist?
for if these eyes still cry
do you not hurt me?

         its okay.... its okay....

floating coma
swimming thoughts
echoing bass
numb-
in not so many words

smack*
*smash
boom*
*hit
thwack*

bleed*

        its okay....its okay....

numb-
in not so many words

       its okay....its okay....

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©2005-2009 ~undecided-impulsive
:iconundecided-impulsive:

Author's Comments

numbing of abuse


(its probably too random, see what u think)

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:iconbexie:
I love the contrasts you use in the poem, so moving :hug:
:icongirlinterupted364:
very cool and kinda sad i like it

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But now I realize I'd give anything I have to walk a day in my old shoes. Wondering what my first smoke would be like, my first fuck, my next fuck up.
:iconamadrierith:
I love the repitition of It's okay... this is beautiful, I love it :)

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I'm a black rose, in your bouquet of white:blackrose:
Hell is so beautiful that it would torment an angel to insanity

William Blake
:iconnonartist27:
I really enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for submitting it.

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Sandy
:iconundecided-impulsive:
thanks for the support guys, truly appreciated
:iconinferiortalent:
wow, thats really powerful, great writing!

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STANDING ON THE FRINGES OF LIFE

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